{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"38476420","dateCreated":"1304435775","smartDate":"May 3, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"kvirdi7954","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kvirdi7954","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/4paragraphs.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/38476420"},"dateDigested":1532763332,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"gOOD JOB","description":"I know I am not going to fall off. Needs to be a little longer though.I made so many connections when I was reading your text. It was a nice story becuase you had good grammar.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"38475436","dateCreated":"1304434957","smartDate":"May 3, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"kpetrovi0275","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kpetrovi0275","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/4paragraphs.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/38475436"},"dateDigested":1532763332,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"expository paragraph","description":"i liked how you gave alot of deatail about tricking a younger sibiling  i would defenetally try it if i had a littel sister or brother.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"38475406","dateCreated":"1304434927","smartDate":"May 3, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"mkandila7356","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mkandila7356","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/4paragraphs.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/38475406"},"dateDigested":1532763332,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Persuasive Paragraph","description":"Wow, great job on your paragraph! Your beginning sentence was very catchy in which it made me want to the rest of the paragraph. Your word choice was fantastic and very descriptive. You really made me believe your opinion about Emily not being an angel. I like how you clearly stated your opinion at the  beginning and backed it up with very good points. The only thing i would say is to make sure your using proper puncuation like commas, and for the dialogue sections. For example when you said Emily always asks "Can i have this" or "Can i have that? Other than that, your paragraph was very persuasive, and wonderfully well written!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"38475058","dateCreated":"1304434577","smartDate":"May 3, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"fliakako0445","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/fliakako0445","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/4paragraphs.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/38475058"},"dateDigested":1532763333,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"descriptive","description":"nice detail with explaining your sister and how she looks","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}