Try if you Dare! Persuasive Paragraph Baking a cake is not a rocket science, but for Kinder it seems to be the biggest challenge. Kinder’s cake is not a delight; it is so heavy, that the next day you will get a stomach ache! After making the cake five to six times, and failing each attempt to make a mouth watering one, everybody is now urging him to stop. Today in the world, so many generous people are dying of hunger; meanwhile Kinder is wasting such important ingredients such as flour, butter, and sugar to create a worthless cake. Not only that, he is even wasting the precious electricity. He is even increasing a health risk, when anyone tries his cake! The bad news is if you don’t eat the cake, he would keep saying “please” until you agree with him. What a shame. Once he’s done, my mom wants us to be polite, and try his demon of torture cake. All I could say to that is, if you eat his cake, remember the things you are wasting.
Descriptive Never let kinder make his cake! Right after school he started baking one, when he was done; he brought it to the table. It was very salty, and buttery, so I inferred he put salted butter. Not only was it salty, it had absolute no sweet to it, making it taste like cheese gone bad. When I went closer to the cake, a bad smell reached my nose; it was like a sour sweet smell, as the cake ran amarathon. The cake looked burnt from the outside, with all black sides. You could always hear the sound of proudness when Kinder is done. Whenever he cuts the cake it gets worse, it always has a green color combined with a brownish mix to it, and horrifying, yellow spots in it. It was very hard from the inside, and outside, I was scared to break my teeth! Whenever I cut the cake, it made a hard crunchy sound; it was hard and rough to touch, just like a Rusk. If you do eat, it’s at your own risk!
Expository It’s not a delight when Kinder makes his cake. His steps to the cake are very unique. First he sings a song, probably to be entertained, some reason his songs are always about ducks. Second when he is ready, he starts cracking eggs, not the normal way, but a different way. He throws it up in the air, and then catches it with his bowl, which then it cracks. That way gets very annoying, because sometimes he misses the bowl, and then there’s yoke everywhere on the floor.Third, he mixes the yoke with the flour, flour that is filled with spices by kinder to make you tear, when you’re done eating the cake. Fourth, he puts the mixed flour in the microwave to let it warm down! Then he puts some brown materials mixed with green in the flour. The most disgusting part is, he puts yellow peppers in it. Then finally, he puts the dough in a tray filled with lemon, hot sauce, and Turkish delights. When he is done my mom forces everybody to eat it, and when where done eating the horrifying cake we feel sick, and get a headache. And that’s why I think Kinder’s cake is not a delight!
Narrative paragraph One sunny afternoon, kinder start baking a cake, he was all exited that I learned a new recipe! I inferred that he wanted to make it for Family Day. He said “my journey’s bin magical as soon as I started making cakes, I have learned my mistakes now, I came to one cake that probably could make you feel magical too”. I was laughing so hard, as it was not a joke. He started baking the cake, until my dad came. He was furious with Kinder working with the oven, so he started watching him! Kinder was finally done his magical cake, so my dad put it on a tray, and started moving to the oven. As he was moving to the oven, he dropped the cake on the stove, and it was all smashed, and lost its shape. Kinder start crying, saying `` my magical dream is over, but my dad still served it. My dad put it on a plate, and I could see all these different colors. I even saw a dark pretzel! The good part was Kinder stopped crying. I learned a vey valuble lesson that day, and that lesson was never let Kinder make his magical cake.
Persuasive Paragraph
Baking a cake is not a rocket science, but for Kinder it seems to be the biggest challenge. Kinder’s cake is not a delight; it is so heavy, that the next day you will get a stomach ache! After making the cake five to six times, and failing each attempt to make a mouth watering one, everybody is now urging him to stop. Today in the world, so many generous people are dying of hunger; meanwhile Kinder is wasting such important ingredients such as flour, butter, and sugar to create a worthless cake. Not only that, he is even wasting the precious electricity. He is even increasing a health risk, when anyone tries his cake! The bad news is if you don’t eat the cake, he would keep saying “please” until you agree with him. What a shame. Once he’s done, my mom wants us to be polite, and try his demon of torture cake. All I could say to that is, if you eat his cake, remember the things you are wasting.
Descriptive
Never let kinder make his cake! Right after school he started baking one, when he was done; he brought it to the table. It was very salty, and buttery, so I inferred he put salted butter. Not only was it salty, it had absolute no sweet to it, making it taste like cheese gone bad. When I went closer to the cake, a bad smell reached my nose; it was like a sour sweet smell, as the cake ran a marathon. The cake looked burnt from the outside, with all black sides. You could always hear the sound of proudness when Kinder is done. Whenever he cuts the cake it gets worse, it always has a green color combined with a brownish mix to it, and horrifying, yellow spots in it. It was very hard from the inside, and outside, I was scared to break my teeth! Whenever I cut the cake, it made a hard crunchy sound; it was hard and rough to touch, just like a Rusk. If you do eat, it’s at your own risk!
Expository
It’s not a delight when Kinder makes his cake. His steps to the cake are very unique. First he sings a song, probably to be entertained, some reason his songs are always about ducks. Second when he is ready, he starts cracking eggs, not the normal way, but a different way. He throws it up in the air, and then catches it with his bowl, which then it cracks. That way gets very annoying, because sometimes he misses the bowl, and then there’s yoke everywhere on the floor. Third, he mixes the yoke with the flour, flour that is filled with spices by kinder to make you tear, when you’re done eating the cake. Fourth, he puts the mixed flour in the microwave to let it warm down! Then he puts some brown materials mixed with green in the flour. The most disgusting part is, he puts yellow peppers in it. Then finally, he puts the dough in a tray filled with lemon, hot sauce, and Turkish delights. When he is done my mom forces everybody to eat it, and when where done eating the horrifying cake we feel sick, and get a headache. And that’s why I think Kinder’s cake is not a delight!
Narrative paragraph
One sunny afternoon, kinder start baking a cake, he was all exited that I learned a new recipe! I inferred that he wanted to make it for Family Day. He said “my journey’s bin magical as soon as I started making cakes, I have learned my mistakes now, I came to one cake that probably could make you feel magical too”. I was laughing so hard, as it was not a joke. He started baking the cake, until my dad came. He was furious with Kinder working with the oven, so he started watching him! Kinder was finally done his magical cake, so my dad put it on a tray, and started moving to the oven. As he was moving to the oven, he dropped the cake on the stove, and it was all smashed, and lost its shape. Kinder start crying, saying `` my magical dream is over, but my dad still served it. My dad put it on a plate, and I could see all these different colors. I even saw a dark pretzel! The good part was Kinder stopped crying. I learned a vey valuble lesson that day, and that lesson was never let Kinder make his magical cake.