I was waiting in line to get on the rides. “Why did I even come here” I mumbled. The amusement park was a very crowded place; long wait times, hot weather, and last but certainly not least, excitement. I went on many rides to prepare myself for the monstrous Behemoth. As I approached the monstrous drop, I started to scream. Everyone on the ride started to laugh at me. As the ride came to a finish, I became much disoriented. I made a statement; “I am never going on a rollercoaster again!”.
Persuasive
You must ride an extreme coaster like the behemoth. It provides extreme thrills. If you haven’t ridden a coaster yet, then you have to hop in your vehicle and ride one. The feeling after that first jump gets you really pumped. When you are going up and down and are scared for your life, a fluid called adrenaline is released into your blood stream. It makes you feel stronger, faster, and more agile. People who like this feeling are called adrenaline junkies. If you would like to experience this feeling, then you should ride an extreme coaster.
Descriptive
As you start to smell the air filled with that alcohol and hot dog smell, you start to remember you are strapped into the coaster. As the coaster starts to move you realize what you see. You are starting to climb the track at a steep angle, when you notice the beautiful city in front of you. Your heart is beating faster every second. But just before you know it, you are at the peak of the track. The drop starts, and your stomach starts to feel like its in your throat! As you approach the bottom you are forced into your seat from the gravity. After a brief second you adrenaline kicks in. What a feeling! You suddenly feel stronger, because of the adrenaline. Roller coasters are great. They’re fun, fast, and exciting.
Expository
When you ride a rollercoaster, there are key things you must do. The first thing you must do is wait in line. You must do these steps because without them you would not be able to ride a rollercoaster. Next strap yourself in. After you do that, you must make sure all lose items are secure. After you have completed all these steps, the next key thing is to have fun. That is how you ride a rollercoaster.
Narrative
I was waiting in line to get on the rides. “Why did I even come here” I mumbled. The amusement park was a very crowded place; long wait times, hot weather, and last but certainly not least, excitement. I went on many rides to prepare myself for the monstrous Behemoth. As I approached the monstrous drop, I started to scream. Everyone on the ride started to laugh at me. As the ride came to a finish, I became much disoriented. I made a statement; “I am never going on a rollercoaster again!”.
Persuasive
You must ride an extreme coaster like the behemoth. It provides extreme thrills. If you haven’t ridden a coaster yet, then you have to hop in your vehicle and ride one. The feeling after that first jump gets you really pumped. When you are going up and down and are scared for your life, a fluid called adrenaline is released into your blood stream. It makes you feel stronger, faster, and more agile. People who like this feeling are called adrenaline junkies. If you would like to experience this feeling, then you should ride an extreme coaster.
Descriptive
As you start to smell the air filled with that alcohol and hot dog smell, you start to remember you are strapped into the coaster. As the coaster starts to move you realize what you see. You are starting to climb the track at a steep angle, when you notice the beautiful city in front of you. Your heart is beating faster every second. But just before you know it, you are at the peak of the track. The drop starts, and your stomach starts to feel like its in your throat! As you approach the bottom you are forced into your seat from the gravity. After a brief second you adrenaline kicks in. What a feeling! You suddenly feel stronger, because of the adrenaline. Roller coasters are great. They’re fun, fast, and exciting.
Expository
When you ride a rollercoaster, there are key things you must do. The first thing you must do is wait in line. You must do these steps because without them you would not be able to ride a rollercoaster. Next strap yourself in. After you do that, you must make sure all lose items are secure. After you have completed all these steps, the next key thing is to have fun. That is how you ride a rollercoaster.